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POSTED BY: dreamsicluv on Nov 25, 2007
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i express myself best in verse...
life and dream
as mirrors seem,
Their reflection's
come to life in me...
from the mirror
to the man...
round and round
and back again...
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i will be there, by the sunset
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POSTED BY: FamilyJules on Nov 25, 2007
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I like this one, too. Short and sweet. Wish I could write poetry. Without censoring the hell outta myself, that is. 
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The world was made for those not cursed with self-awareness. The rest of us are fucked.
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POSTED BY: BrandiLea on Nov 26, 2007
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I have never been a poet, and I know it.........
I express myself better with words that other ways
That doesn't mean I am any good at it.
But I try and for me thats all that matters
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If you can't handle me at my WORST then you sure as shiznit don't deserve me at my BEST
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POSTED BY: FamilyJules on Nov 29, 2007
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I writ (not "wrote," but "writ") some stuff
Brandiwine was ever so kind to comment ALL of them, and was everso positive, and for that I am eternally grateful. Overall, however, I am feeling really insecure and exposed with those "things" (I can't call them "poems") out there. I am soliciting feedback, essentially. And I'm probably going to take them down tomorrow. Because it's very naked, having them up...plus, my currently toilet-diving self-esteem has deemed that they must be shit. So there's that.
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