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Posted On 06/27/2008 17:03:26 by Juless
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She hides herself in mirrors, the one I wish to be

She disappears in glimmers

Glimpses only, not quite seen

 

She veils herself in dreamings

Redolent with the night

A promise of a secret

Always out of sight

 

No viscera, no worldly pain

No tangible desire

No problem, stuggle, worry, plight

Just calm and cool and vain

 

She lives beyond the other

Creating as she will

Existence but a dream of hers

Morphing at her whim

 

Yes, she hides in mirrors

That one I wish to be

I glimpse her in my slumber

Smooth and cold and me

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06/28/2008 04:00:55
wow you said i had a way with words you are far way better than i was


06/28/2008 03:37:33
I like it, but brings to mind images of death at the end lol. Other than that, 5 cool points.


06/28/2008 01:15:19
that is truly a powerful poem juli. you have created a crystal clear world of imaginatory being.
i likes it!


06/27/2008 20:55:59
I can't describe how I feel about this....... so good good is not the word.... so real


06/27/2008 20:17:35
WOW! Beautiful.


06/27/2008 18:20:49
You wish to be hidden, but known for where you are?

Lack of sleep, you want to dream but you can't.

No emotional restraint.

Seeing yourself above others you create your destiny, to your own accord.

Cold being the wishlessness of you.

I like this poem, Jules.


06/27/2008 17:12:19
Tis redolent of a requiem, almost radiant with hope however remiss of that hope while remaining placid... content... awaiting a chance for the echo's of ones subconscious to resound once again; I love it wifey :)!


06/27/2008 17:11:50
This is great, like your revealing a part of your self. Beautiful poem indeed!


06/27/2008 17:07:50
Beautiful.




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