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Ethrad: Misslingen
Posted On 06/21/2008 17:01:12 by Ethrad
Ich versuch,
Doch noch.
Misslingen, doch noch.
Was soll das bedeuten?
Ist mir egal,
Derzeit.

German Test 0001

I try,
Yet again.
To fail, yet again.
What does it mean?
I don't care,
For now.

Tags: Ethrad Poem German Deutsch Misslingen



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From: littlered
06/22/2008 12:46:43
 Melancholy and powerful. Good stuff


From: strawberry_fields
06/21/2008 22:55:36

wow.

 

From: Redei
06/21/2008 18:00:22
Wow - I always feel like I have to have a snappy comment or comeback - but really wow.  It's very well indescribeable in German - but  the words denote a certain longinging... then when you translate (and thank you for doing that) it's twice as powerful... hey you can really write... Buddy Pal


From: Juless
06/21/2008 17:57:37
It's very sad and yearning, and very touching. Nice job, and major extra points for the whole German thing.

From: PhillipS1961
06/21/2008 17:05:00
Dankeschön.


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